I'm beginning to see why people have bands/writing teams. Musically, I can only ever figure out a basic melody, and usually only a chorus. I wonder if there is anything like song writing lessons. I've been told by a few people that some of my poems would make good songs, and indeed some of them were written with a melody or rhythm to them. It's probable that I just don't have musical talent. I love singing, but I have no idea if I am actually any good at it (ie if I'd ever be able to sell albums commercially or anything). Yes, I know Paris Hilton did it, but that was just a money grab on her part, I've been told.
Anyway, that's my blurb. I'm gonna keep trying to work on this particular song and see if I can't expand it.